E-PORTFOLIO - Writing Term One
ACHIEVEMENT OBJECTIVES:
Structure:
L2: Organise texts, using a range of structures.
Indicators:
Uses knowledge of word and sentence order to communicate meaning when creating text.
Organises and sequences ideas and information with some confidence.
Begins to use a variety of sentence structures, beginnings, and lengths.
L3: Organise texts, using a range of appropriate structures
Indicators:
Organises written ideas into paragraphs with increasing confidence.
Uses a variety of sentence structures, beginnings, and lengths.
L4: Organise texts, using a range of appropriate structures.
Organise and sequences ideas and information for a particular purpose or effect;
Uses a variety of sentences structures, beginnings, and lengths for effect.
Go through your writing and highlight examples of the following sentences.
Simple sentences - green
Compound sentences - yellow y
Complex sentences - light blue
The plane finally lifted we finally took off. I was just catching some sleep but there was an announcement for anyone who needed food. So I woke up and ordered a coffee and a sandwich So Mr. Koala went back to the food kitchen. He panted because he was in a rush to get us food when he got there he gasped '' Where is the food! '' All the other workers went silent for a moment. Mr. Koala had to complain to Captain Polar Bear. They were both very annoyed all the other workers got a punishment ''they sighed ''they had to clean the plates, cups and everything else like that.
A few moments later I was moaning and groaning " I NEED FOOD!!!!!! Luckily the captain had spare food. I asked if I could try something He said " sure first I need to ask Fiona. My face was in shock " Fiona is here can I move beside her? "sure" so I moved to the spare seat beside her. Suddenly the captain forgot about driving " uh I need to go! He rushed back to drive the plain. Everyone wondered whats going on. We were lucky he gave us the food in time and saved the plane from falling.
As me and Fiona took a bite " ewe " it was a tuna and chicken sandwich so we stopped eating and threw. A few moments later I was fast asleep but captain polar bear made an announcement. Now landing so please get your stuff and exit the plain when we land I hope you enjoyed your flight on animal airline!